The other woman

As if my helplessness

was the only thing

that gave him hope

As if my death

was the only way

he tasted growth

As if I was someone

that could easily be replaced

with a body he could bang

and as if ..

all that he thought of

was actually all that I am

…….

the man I gave up my life for

brought

”another”

woman in my funeral


Comments

12 responses to “The other woman”

  1. chuna comment ye choye mawo.. ):

    1. chaa? thuiki thakula la?
      ki bamlata?

      1. mm.. thuiki thakula.. ):

  2. Prarena Avatar
    Prarena

    Too good baini. Wish I had more beautiful words to explain how amazing this is ๐Ÿ™‚

    1. Thankyou very much ๐Ÿ™‚ โค

  3. Silver Lining Avatar
    Silver Lining

    can i say i am speechless because you just wrote something that could be described beyond words?
    -Your Greatest fan

    1. You have no idea how delighted I am by your comment !
      Thanks

      1. Silver Lining Avatar
        Silver Lining

        ๐Ÿ˜€

      2. ๐Ÿ™‚ by the way I like ur name silver lining ๐Ÿ™‚

  4. Silver Lining Avatar
    Silver Lining

    “all that he thought of
    was actually all that I am”
    that line,man!!

    1. Thankyoooouuuuuuu ๐Ÿ™‚
      You made my day
      Thank you thankyou

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