YOU & m e

I’m someone who gets lost in her blankets

How will I find me

In your ‘Blank”?

I’m someone who dreams of waterfalls

And you tell me

We will live together

In a fish tank

I’m someone who lives life

without fearing death

And all that you say about life

Is so compact

is so difficult

that it leaves me out of breath

You say I am stupid

I say nothing back

Because what I think and feel

will not fill in

the things you lack…..

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Comments

9 responses to “YOU & m e”

  1. asim Avatar

    dd.. amazing hunu ko pani limit huncha ni 😉 kasto strong k yo poem ta.. short and powerful 🙂 🙂 love this 🙂

    1. raetherainbow Avatar

      Thanks haina khas babu timilai.matra testo lagne ho

      1. asim Avatar

        common d 🙂 malie matra haina.. there are plenty of us 🙂 who feel the same

  2. poonam Avatar

    simple and strong!! 🙂

    1. raetherainbow Avatar

      thankyou 🙂
      It means a lot the feedback!

  3. maxixmus Avatar

    yet another BRILLIANT writing, you go grrl!!

    1. raetherainbow Avatar

      🙂 thankyouuuu hehe
      Thankyou so so so much

  4. Sanjay Bajaj Avatar
    Sanjay Bajaj

    Good one! Keep it up! 🙂

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